Tuesday, 9 September 2014

రీడర్ స్పందన తొ తొలి ఆనుభవం మీకొసం.................................


 రీడర్ స్పందన తొ తొలి ఆనుభవం మీకొసం.................................

Hi this is spandana……nenu andangane untanani anukuntunna…….like not bad annamata. abbayilu nannu chudataniki takadaniki naa tho maataladadaaniki chastuntaru. naku X korikalu chala chala ekkuva. maadi mancheriyal nenu jangaon lo b.tech chaduvutunnanu.








e story na first year lo di. ma parents ki ne nokkadaanine santanam. ma daddy business maku pedda cloth shop undi. naku 13,14 years age nunde X meeda picchi korika. appati nunde pukulo vellu pettukunedanni. oka sari anukokunda maa mummy daddy dengicchukuntunnappudu chusanu. adi kuda madyahanam 1.30pm nenu aa rozu school nundi tondaraga vocchanu. aa story taruvata cheputanu. ayite aa rozu nundi naa pukulo okate gula. maa inti daggare oka abbayi ki line vesa, appudu naa age 14 nenu 9th standard lo chaduvu tunde danni….naaku ippatiki a incident gyapakam undi….ganesh utsavalu jarugu tunnavi. nenu langa oni lo talaninda pulu pettukoni mummy tho ganesh madamp loki vella. akkada aa abbayi ni chusa. nannu chudagane saiga chesi rammanadu.

nenu mummy undani saiga chesi taruvatha ani signal iccha. then mummy tho kalisi puja aina taruvata bayataki vachamu. nenu mummy tho, ‘mummy nuvvu intiki vellu nenu kamala (na classmate) valla intiki velli taruvata vasta nannanu. mummy ok, tondaraga ra ani inti vaipu vellindi. nenu naduchu kuntu konta duram vellagane aa abbayi naa daggaraku vocchadu. Iddaram konta duram vellaka ikkade wait cheyyi five minutes lo vasta nani velladu. nenu road pai nilabadi unnanu. dim street lights veluturu, nannevaraina gurthu padatharo nemo nanna bhayam tho chachi potunna. ten minutes taruvatha vocchadu, pada ani nannu oka sandulo oka room vaddaku teesukelladu. evaridi e room ani adiga. naa friends, pakkane village varidi ikkada room teesukoni chaduvu kuntunnaru annadu. books, kinda rendu chapalu vati pai bedsheet antha penta la undi. dim bulb okati velugu tundi. nenu akkadi paristhitini artham chesukuntune vunna antholo nannu venakala nundi gattiga kougilinchu koni na meda pai muddulu pettadam start chesadu. nenu cooperate chestu moolugu thu athani cheti ni naa salla pai pettukogane vatini pisikesadu. noppi tho okkasari aricha….nemmadiga cheyi anagaane nannu alage kinda paduko bettadu. na blouse vippi naa sanlanu cheeka saagadu.

naakaithe edo mattu kammu kundi. eppudu naa battalanni teesesado teliya ledu iddaram nagnanga kougilinchu koni muddulu pettu kuntunnamu. naaku picchi mood vachesindi…nannu dengamani vadini naa paiki lagukunna. naa rendu kallu vidadisi naa puku pai modda petti durcha daaniki try chesadu kaani vella le. two three times try chesaka nene lechi vadi modda chetiloki teesukoni naa puku pai raastu lopaliki teesukodaniki try chesa. kaani kudurala. iddariki telidu ela dengu kovalo. nenu chemata tho poorthiga tadisi poya intalo evaro navvina chappudu vinipinchindi. chuste……atanu maa inti daggare unde abbayi, around 20 years untayanukunta……pillalaku dance nerpistuntadu. asalu sangati memu room loki vocchaka door lock cheyyala. atanu door moosi maa daggariki vocchadu. mee iddari saigalu nenu mandapam daggare chusa. follow avutu vocchanu. ani antune battalu vippasagadu. nenu tondaraga lechi naa battalu tesuko daniki kadila. ante nannu krindiki netti naa pai kurchunnadu. ore ala chair lo kurcho ela dengalo nenu nerpista chuchi nerchu ko anagane aa abbayi bhayam to chair lokurchunnadu. nenu atanini netta daaniki try chesa kaani vaadu naa rendu chetulu tana oka chethi tho pattukoni naa tala pai baaganiki nokkuthu naa paiki vocchi oka chethini naa puku pai raastu naa chinna chinna sanlanu cheeka saagadu. naaku malli edo lokam lo unnattu feeling. melliga naa chetulu vadilesi oka chetto naa sanlanu piskutu maro chetho naa puko loki oka velu petti poorthi ga doorchadu. taruvata melli melliga rendu fingers petti chethi tho dengadam modalu pettadu. ala five minutes chese sariki nenu kaarchesukunnanu. tanu naa rasalani melliga naa gudda lo ki petti oka finger naa gudda lo durchadu. picchi noppi ga unna bharistu moolga saaganu. atanu nannu tippi paduko betti naa veepu pai kisses ivvadam start chesadu. gudda lonundi matram velu teeyaledu; alage naa pai ki ekki nannu koddiga lepi krindi nundi chetulu ponistu naa rendu sandlanu pattukoni pisukutu naa ventrukalalo tana moham tho raastu tana moddani naa gudda kesi adama saagadu.

 

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